ROBERTOREG'S NOTES
Chapter 1
In
the opening scene of the novel DEVIL MAKE A THIRD, the reader is
introduced to young Buck Bannon behind his plow "blinded by the sun" and
sweat stinging his eyes and burning as it soaked into the raw places
on his neck chafed by his mule's reins but none of that mattered because
"he was eighteen and he was following a mule for the last
time." Popping a sweat in the early morning sunshine reminded Buck that
it was time for this "dirt road sport" to leave the farm and try his
luck in town. He had a twenty dollar gold coin burning a hole in his
pocket and the time had come for him to make his big move. Buck was
heading to Aven, the new boomtown a few miles away from the Bannon farm
which simply consisted of a railway station with a small row of
tin-roofed stores and unpainted houses.
Turning
his plow out of the soft dirt of the field, Buck looked between his
mule's ears for the last time to see his mother rocking on her porch as
he aimed his mule toward the sandy hard-packed clay of his Mama's
meticulously swept yard. Buck rejoiced at his coming freedom from the
drudgery of his parents' farm. In an act of both rebellion and celebration, Buck reined
his mule in concentric circles as he plowed up the bare-earth of his
Mama's front yard. Slapping his mule with the looped ends of his lines,
Buck yelled, danced and kicked up his heels while imitating the
movements of his mule. Finally, he calmed
down enough to speak and when he did, he imitated a square dance
caller,"ROUND AND ROUND, swing yore partner and do it again."
The
entire time he was plowing and rejoicing at his anticipated freedom,
Buck kept his eye on the second most important character in this novel:
his mother, Jeanie McPhearson Bannon, pregnant with her thirteenth child, who sat rocking on her front porch, dipping
snuff and observing her oldest boy showing off. After he finally
finished tearing up her carefully groomed yard and telling her he was
heading to Aven, Jeanie remarked, "Them pickpockets'll fight over you."
The
novel's second scene occurs inside the Bannon family home after the
evening meal with Buck preparing to get a ride to Aven that night with
his younger brother Jeff driving him to town in the Bannon's flat-bed
wagon. As Buck prepares to leave the farm for the last time, the
reader is introduced to two of Buck's brothers and his father Joe. The
other Bannon children are present but the reader only gets important
information describing Buck's younger brothers, Jeff and Hearn. These
five characters described in this first chapter (Buck Bannon, Mrs. Joe
Bannon, Joe Bannon, Jeff Bannon and Hearn Bannon) are the ones from
which most of the action in the novel grows.
The
novel's third scene describes Buck and Jeff's evening journey to Aven
and the reader gains insight into Buck's personality as the monotony of
the wagon ride produces a stream of images from his consciousness which
causes the young man to recollect scenes from the rural life he is
abandoning and producing the first feelings on homesickness.
Rather
than having Jeff cross a creek with his wagon, Buck jumps off the
wagon, bids goodbye to his little brother and walks the remaining half
mile into Aven. In the last paragraphs of Chapter 1, the reader is
finally told that the scene of the action in the novel will mostly occur
"in a small corner of Alabama [that] wasn't lying fallow any longer,
but was heavy with the germ of a town."
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